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Thread: Screenshots A Deadly Trail

  1. #1
    Member
    Registered: May 2003
    Location: Germany

    Screenshots A Deadly Trail

    Here are some screenshots of my 2nd FM "A Deadly Trail".
    The shots are 1024x768....

    The bar
    corridor - 1024x768 - a corridor - this screenshot may look a bit detailless - I have'nt finished all details in this area yet.
    The cellar
    a corridor in the cellar
    a storeroom
    a old hammerite "office"
    catacombs1
    catacombs2

    Looking forward to your critism !
    Last edited by BlackThief; 19th Aug 2004 at 15:31.

  2. #2
    Vertical Contest Winner 2009
    Registered: Sep 2002
    Location: The Great White North
    things i see

    bar: lacks detail, very large, try this idea, make some booths around the side that people would sit in, if you've planned max payne think about the bar in the hotel, if they are raised up a bit from the floor it would be neat, then you can put a spot above each table with the cool light beams pointing down.

    catacombs1: try a frame around that stained glass to separate it from the wall, looks very inserted that way.

    the rest are very nice, i like the blocks around the door frame in a corrider in the cellar.

  3. #3
    New Member
    Registered: Jul 2004
    Location: Within the temple
    Nice screenshots. I like some of your architecture. Especially your ceilings and beams. Are those custom torches by the way? Those are nice. I also checked out the screenshots to your other missions. Nice work. Keep it up!

    Keeper Origin

  4. #4
    Looking good, I like them. That hammer looks familiar

    A suggestion, if you don't mind: I think the bar's ceiling could use a couple of wooden beams and perhaps a few support pillars. At the moment it looks as if the ceiling might soon collapse under its own weight.

  5. #5
    Member
    Registered: May 2003
    Location: Germany
    you're right - that stained glass hammer is from ominous bequest. I wanted to ask you before posting the screenshots, but forgot it I have had some trouble with my webspace...

    I'll change the bar a bit...you're right - a few pillars would be nice.

  6. #6
    Member
    Registered: Jun 2002
    Location: Canada, Ontario, Toronto
    Good stuff milord.
    Keep it up.
    Maketh yee a grand fan missions.
    Nice work on the light beams. Light beams will be everywhere in fms these days!

    -Saintly Architect Alexius
    ___________________________________________________
    The Hammerite Imperium Lead
    -Dromed Architecture Tutorial Supreme

  7. #7
    Member
    Registered: Jul 2003
    Location: United Kingdom
    Quote Originally Posted by Alexius
    Nice work on the light beams. Light beams will be everywhere in fms these days!
    I blame Dario!

  8. #8
    Desperately Dodgy Moderator
    Registered: Nov 2001
    Location: Dragonsreach
    Indeed, Dario is to blame.

    I love the tattered banners! Wonderful work.

  9. #9
    Member
    Registered: Jul 1999
    Location: Beta Grove
    Ohhhhh, a Hammerite mission
    And a good-looking one to boot.
    Looks like we're in for a treat

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